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Which are you using for the edit? I can give you more specific scene-by-scene beats if I know the source material.

A lone protagonist (often from an anime like Akira or Cowboy Bebop ) navigating the neon-lit streets of Tokyo at night. jap_edit.mp4

A fading out to static, leaving the viewer with a sense of "mono no aware" (the pathos of things). Which are you using for the edit

If you're struggling with structure, try exporting stills from your video or using a subtitle file (.srt) to find the "beats" of the story before you start cutting. jap_edit.mp4

A sense of isolation or "searching" for something in a crowded, indifferent city.